The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

The Fisk
New Designs - Bethany II
This time for sure! Bethany learns about her condition, and finds some not-so-secret admirers. 
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Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 3
This is a superbly great story. I love it and can't wait to read more. The idea is great, the curse is titillating and Bethany's slipping memory and wanton disregard for growing pleasure is great.

Unfortunately, I have to parrot what's already been said, bit confused on the to sustain the curse explanation, something must have gotten muddled, which is fine, I'm sure you can easily fix that.

Hopefully Bethany gets bigger and doing things and getting about get more difficult for her. As she grows into larger proportions and tighter clothing, I hope she finds herself growing more encumbered and having a harder time maintaining everything in the quest for intimate partners.. but somehow managing a win anyway.
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
So far this is an awesome series, hits all my quirks! Sharing a little criticism that others had provided  the details of the curse are confusing. She has to be intimate, but if she is she will get smaller? So might want to clarify that. Also the BE description could be a little betteraccurate. A 38OO bra is massive, much larger than cantelopes. But I love it when a big belly presses the tits up into the girls chin, so hot, so more of that! Otherwise totally loving this and can't wait for more!
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Aside from more than none, we have no idea how big Alyssa got and I have a tough time imagining 38OO breasts growing to cantaloupes for Bethany. Also she has to be intimate to fulfill her curse, doing so changes whoever she is intimate with, and that causes her to lose what she has? Might want to clarify that because otherwise it is a selfkilling curse.rnStill good and waiting for more!
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Absolutely amazing. I noticed a grammatical error here and there, but nothing huge. A misplaced period, or comma. All in all absolutely amazing.
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Super hot but such a tease for the next entry!
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