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The Overflowing Bra

The Fisk
New Designs - Bethany II
This is Part II of what should only be three. I know, I said I'd conclude it, and I was wrong. I'm working on more, and long stories aren't my thing. There is outstretched clothes, not so secret admirers, and a calm before the storm for Bethany. You will not have to wait nearly three years for the conclusion. 
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The Fisk
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Yes. This was a complete accident.
Bdizz
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
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