As much as she enjoys waking up with bigger boobs every day, it's getting harder and harder for Persephone to keep the rest of the library from noticing her swiftly-swelling breasts, and things only get more embarrassing when the lactation serum she's been gorging herself with starts to live up to it's name at the worst possible time.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 4.75
- Characters: 4.75
- Technical: 5.00
anon
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
1010, can't wait for more
FleshFan
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
growth and lactation and nipple induced orgasms, what could you wish more for, except for a next part?
Qeue
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
As a librarian, your descriptions of work are nearly too spoton I can tell you really spent some time researching that, they give me work flashbacks. The inconvenience of growing breasts is great, and I can tell you've really polished your word choices although I have to admit I love the florid descriptions you used to use as well. Great work!
deuxanges
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Fantastic! The best thing I have read here in a long time. Good pace of expansion, detailed descriptions of breasts and lactation. Some parts required a suspension of disbelief, but that was fine with me. After all, this is supposed to be fantasy. Keep up the good work.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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