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The Overflowing Bra

Yuris Antiques: Spectras Mind
A couple with marital issues stumbles upon a mysterious antique store where they find a board game that changes their lives. 
Average Scores:

Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 2
Overall it wasn't a bad story. It was difficult to follow at times do to the many grammatical errors and inconsistent logic.  The description of breast size was pretty far off base too.  DDE is nowhere near the size of watermelons, just saying.  The character description was very chauvinistic, but I guess if you are into the alpha male  bimbo sub fetish it will be up your alley.
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Loved both of these stories...thank u!!!
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I thought it was a solid story but I dont get why you had to add TG
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I read both of your stories over on xyz and theyre great I hope you keep writing As others have said this is the tea leaves story not spectras mind  I think you mixed up your uploads
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Totally love both of these storiesthough this is the incorrect file Yurias Tea leaves especially is fantastic I hope you write more like it
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Fyi you seem to have uploaded the wrong story
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