When Persephone happens upon a recipe that could make her bust every inch as massive as the buxom woman who comes to her library, she can't resist finding out if it really works, no matter how uncomfortable the side-effects might be.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.63
- BE: 3.63
- Characters: 4.38
- Technical: 4.63
Bb47
Overall= 5, BE= 2, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
FleshFan
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Not so much BE in this story, but still sexy enough. And I know there will be more in the next chapters
mynameisjeff
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
I really can't wait to see the future for this, with such a great start already.
clibretto
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Loving this so far and very much looking forward to the rest
ZS
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Holy moses this was a good start very pumped for the full upload
Lily Bunny
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Ohmygod Hot So hot Super fucking hot Please please do not make us wait too long for the next chapter
GeoffK
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Awesome start This looks like a future classic Cant wait to read the next installmentsrn
Kodos
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
And Im a doofus who doesnt proofread enough This is just part one the rest of the story is coming soon
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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