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Still at the frat house, Bree finds her changes increasing in number and absurdity. When she finally makes it out, what state will she be in? Contains parts 1 and 2.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.75
- BE: 4.38
- Characters: 4.88
- Technical: 4.75
Lesbo
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I love this story! Please continue!
Swogrider
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This is a great series No problem at all with the boobs shrinking As this is a BE story its kind of a necessity to roll them back a bit to avoid truly absurd sizes Well characterized protagonist simple plot that has a lot of potential
Looking forward to whatever you're writing next
BB47
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Keep going. Don't give up. This is good stuff!
ucwe111
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
I have been loving this story and I really hope you keep going with this.
xyz
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Some of the changes listed under other have some interesting implications when Bree gains some cup sizes again
FireFox
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
I enjoy the reality alteration concept and am glad to see a continuation to this series Hope we see more from you
The Almighty Popo
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I'm not a fan of the shrinking breasts, but I don't mind it if it's building toward something interesting. Other than that, you nailed it once again.
Anon
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Reporting my review from the other site:
Fantastic, glad to see this story continued, its one of my favorites on the site, I loved how you went with something different in terms of body changes instead of just doubling down like most authors would have
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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