The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Blake Isaac Gordon
Unknown
Thinking Of You
A fortuneteller woman casts a spell on two women: when their men think of them, their busts will grow.
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 Phoenix
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
I really love this story!! nice idea on the "curse" and the boyfriends
 Pringlesman
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4 
One of my favorite stories, it would be great if there were other husbands who got into other things (gts and ag mainly) otherswise great job/
 HuStle
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
its a really good story ! its magical 
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