A fitness trainer and overall exercise enthusiast, Cameron has always been a little jealous of the effortlessly thin figure of her roommate, and has been waiting for the day that Olivia, and her metabolism, will catch up with her. When the chance to give it a jump-start presents itself in a new protein shake mix, Cam decides she is willing to do anything to see her plan through, even if it means she needs to put on some mass herself.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 4.50
- Characters: 5.00
- Technical: 5.00
gotee
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
It's great when one of the first stories after OFB's posting hiatus is a story of this calibre!
What I love best about this, even more than the well-drawn characters, is how unlikely the start and end points seem. Yet when reading through it feels inevitable. That key point in the story: "...the last plan I had started on that had been seen to any kind of completion had been the plan to fatten Olivia up. Just a little. Just to make her appreciate fitness more. Now I would have to deal with this front door issue."
Perfect. I've read this multiple times, and already consider it a new classic.
ZS
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Muscle and extreme WG aren't even my thang and I loved this story. You sense of pacing and momentum are perfect as always. 10/10!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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