The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Rols Garten
Paul's Problems 9
Riya and Olivia get back together with their sorority sisters. Then sex happens. Allison and Veronica make their escape. Then guns happen. Everyone else prepares for battle. Then sex happens.
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Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Some of the best writing I've seen on this site! Looking forward to more!
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 4, Technical= 1
Agree, having good content on site is the key.Other teieucqnhs generates results too, but if you don't have good original content that interests to your visitors, then no other technique will work.
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Excellent as usual, you've got some good storytelling going on, on top of your imaginative descriptions!
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