Lily goes to the mall expecting to buy some new clothes, but leaves getting moooore than she expected.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 2.75
- BE: 2.75
- Characters: 2.75
- Technical: 3.00
Leviathan
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 1, Technical= 2
Interesting story, but the ending was a bit tragic.
Blargenofram
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Overall a great first effort. I liked how it started out slowly, and the slow speech change is always fun. Keep up the good work!
TheFwank
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 2
On the low side of mediocre, but everyone has to start somewhere. Word of advice, convert to some other formats. Limiting your audience to people who can open .docx files is a bad idea, try including .rtf, .html, or even .txt in the zip next time.
BELover123
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Nice little story. Would love to see the story continue.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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