lightfantastically@gmail.com
An overzealous diet advocate's chance encounter with a witch sees her undergo a sexy, sticky, incredibly sweet transformation that gives her a whole new perspective on life.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.29
- BE: 4.00
- Characters: 4.43
- Technical: 4.86
Bb47
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Abe
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
Light! Good to see you still posting! While sugar and confections definitely doesn't fall into my particular realm of kinks it's great to see you still posting. Any chance for another epic novella in the coming months?
Chargerse
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Loved it and glad to read a new story from you!!
Xero
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
An erotic tale Willy Wonka Style!
Pedant
Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Didn't enjoy it, as I can't stand sticky stuff. Also a little too weird for me I guess.
Also: I hate to be a bringer of bad news, but sugar is about the only thing all scientists agree is bad for one's health. Also teeth.
Catfish
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Excellent. Now I'm hungry for dessert.
Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Admittedly the actual expansion was minor, the story itself was amazing! I really appreciate that while it had "weird transformation" it was nothing too extreme, so easily enjoyed by those that don't have that particular fetish. The characters were simple, but played well off each other and never felt like caricatures. And over all the story was cute and had no malice, which I always appreciate in a "revenge" narrative. I absolutely will be keeping an eye on you for future stories. And I hope to see more focus on expansion in the future, solely for my own interests.
Thank you and keep it up!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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