The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Junk In the Trunk
Butt expansion focused. .txt, .html, and .odt format. Enjoy.
Average Scores:

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I adore this one, it's short but it has character. You really crammed a lot of good detail in there. I guess I can give it a 5 in "BE" if we say it stands for "Butt Expansion". Hell, I kinda want to see this rendered as a comic. It would probably have just the right amount of dialogue.
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Good work - considering the length, the growth scene was great, and the characters all stood out.

Really wish there was a dedicated site as successful as this one for futa growth and ass growth.

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Short and sweet. The growth scene was pretty good, really put a picture in my mind. I thought for how short it was the characters really stood out.

Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

I enjoyed this quite a bit. I'm a big fan of Butt Expansion, and I think you did an excellent job at a story focused on it. Rating the characters was tough because this was obviously just a short, fun story so it's not like you even needed to develop the characters that much. Keep up the excellent writing!

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