Alex and Sarah are having a fun solo summer before going back to college in the fall. They discover an abandoned shop one day and take a number of supposedly magic items with them. Unfortunately for them -all of the items don't quite work the same after their "sell by" date.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.57
- BE: 4.14
- Characters: 4.43
- Technical: 4.43
Madcow
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Miss Lany
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 2
A really REALLY simple story, with most of the writing and scenes having the bare bones description and setup. There's a lot of sex romps in there though, so I'm sure most people would find a decent scene in that rapid succession of scenes somewhere. It was pure sex and doesn't try to be anything else. Could be anyone's cup of tea.
oh2bpreg
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Simplistic with a fair amount of plot convenience, but a fun and enjoyable read.
kate_draffen
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Excellent story! You hit my interests right on the nose. I would love to read more and find out what else in in their bag of tricks!
bobGrimer
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I don't write many reviews which should give you an idea of the level at which I was impressed by this one. Lost some points because the BE could have been more prominent, really only two scenes of growth and they remained within the realms of implausible yet realistic. But that is just personal taste I guess. You did cover a lot of other things all of which I enjoyed. Do you have any other works on other sites? I already checked your name here and found none.
YY
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
really hot one! Excelent described scenes, character developement and some genuis ideas!
thank you for this really amazing story!
BBBobbi
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Wonderful story and I await your next work with baited breath.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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