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This is part 1 of "The Ballad of Maggie." The story takes place years after the events of "The Puzzlebox Curse." It's a strange new world coping with random magical events that erotically transform and feminize. Maggie and her roommate Beth navigate college in this world, as Maggie is on a relationship rebound, and Beth is caught in a funk caused by her magical transformation from a year before. [Note to readers: this story is driven by erotic transformation and is not primarily a breast expansion story, though that is a theme.]
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 3.60
- Characters: 4.20
- Technical: 4.60
Bb47
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I Think
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
It's wonderful to see Randomking back with all his bizarrely awesome transformation ideas! Entertaining, friendly characters are always good too. Looking forward to more!
Dan Standing
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
majmage
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Great read, love all the weird transformations and look forward to reading more!
Catfish
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Always great to see some more of Randomking's erotic weirdness. I wish there were a little more actual transformation here, rather than just people talking about their existing transformations, but it does appear that there's going to be more to look forward to in future parts of this story.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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