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The Overflowing Bra

Rols Garten
Paul's Problems 8: Bars, Swimming Pools, and Vans
Paul and Samantha are on the run from the angel that has stabbed Allison. Their solution involves having sex in public. Iris is being hazed by some of her swimming teammates. Her solution involves having sex underwater. Allison and Veronica are being kept in an undisclosed location. It's not a solution but they have sex anyways to pass the time.
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Vahktang
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

A new chapter, please.

tfg
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I got way into the story and ended up pulling a near all-nighter a couple of nights ago. That's saying something... not usually an experience I have with BE stories. I can't wait for Episode 9. How many will there be?

I Think
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

The plot is taking over! This is not a bad thing XD Minor gripe: a couple places you've referred to some characters by incorrect names (the problems you run into when you have so many fleshed-out characters!)

Holzstar
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Just keeps getting more interesting! Though the actual transformations in this chapter were brief, you've got an engaging story to tell so I'm alright with that.

I look forward to more! Especially Allison getting her buff back on.

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