The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Worker Break
From on high, the Goddesses of Hyrule have decreed that Link shall bed women across the land to bear heroes for future generations. Now Telma is bloated full of Link's progeny, and still manages to run her bar alongside her equally pregnant employees. 
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Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Kinda wish this story went somewhere because I really liked it but it reads like the first 10 minutes of an episode of a show.

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I'll be looking forward to any and all of your future efforts!

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