The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

The ID Card
Alex finds one day that his ID card has been replaced with one that changes reality...But only for him?
Average Scores:

Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Could have been a little more descriptive and longer but I still enjoyed it quite a lot Hope to see a continuation of this story
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

I really enjoyed this story along with your other stories. I also really love the detail you go into especially with the mental changes.

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

Thanks for sharing! Keep writing!

Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

This story was a lot of fun with great potential to continue and develop. I like the way you were describing the character's thoughts and concerns; these are often missing. I would really like to see the descriptions of each event become longer and more detailed. I hope you will continue this story of start a spin-off!

Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 3

I agree with Daichi, the changes were rushed, especially towards the end, but the concept of reality rewrites is something I really like and should be featured more in storys

Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

I definitely hope there's more to come, since this obviously has a lot of potential. I agree that some of the transformations could be expanded on, whereas some of the non-transformation stuff could have been a bit shorter (in particular, the second-day scene of Lexi trying to convince Roy of the events of the previous day).

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Fantastic concept, if only there were more of it.

Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

I really liked how you described the horror of the sexual instability.

Daichi Azure
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

The story seemed a bit rushed in the delivery of the changes that occured. Loved the concept but it lacked a bit of meat to flesh it out a bit better.

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