Dark_princeof_chaos@Yahoo.com
Biologist Ayana and her half-sister Touko are nearing the end of their astounding pregnancies, but despite their ponderous size they'll keep their OB-GYN clinic running to cater to women as huge as themselves. They'll even introduce new, and pleasurable, technologies to the mix!
[Based off of the near-hentai OVA Kagaku Na Yatsura, with an appearance of Haruka Gracia from Basquash!]
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 3.33
- Characters: 4.67
- Technical: 5.00
Heyo
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
deux_anges
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Apart from BE, this story also contains some pregnancy stuff, which I really like!
The overall writing is good, so there are no major complaints, just some suggestions: There are good descriptions of both belly and boobs, but mostly of their current size. A bit more descriptions of breast and belly *growth* would go down well. It might also be good to start from a non-pregnant, non-enhanced character and follow her development. :)
Anyway, as I said, I enjoyed it so keep up the good work!
Sucker4Boobs
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Your descriptions of the characters makes me drool. I'd love to read more!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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