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The Overflowing Bra

Rols Garten
Paul's Problems 7: Memories, Recruitment, and Genuine Drama
Paul and Allison try to get some clothes for him from his house without having sex. They fail. Olivia tries to keep to the schedule she's been given. She fails. Samantha tries to spice things up in the bedroom. She mostly succeeds. Then everything goes to shit.
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Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I'm loving this story - despite the similar nature of the transformations, there always described in such a manner such that they feel fresh and exciting!

I'm really looking forward to seeing how it's going to end - keep up the great work!

Lily Bunny
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

I have to be honest. I was really liking this story at first, but as it went on, I noticed there were less and less new transformations happening in each new chapter. I was really hoping more new types of chreature girls would come up. Maybe Centaurs, catgirls, octopus girls, wolf girls etc... I will continue to read, but I am still hoping for new TFs.

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Another excellent installment. I'm always checking this website to see if you've posted the next chapter. There's not too much to say as you're maintaining the same great quality that I originally fell in love with.

I suppose my one gripe would have to be that expansion has obviously fallen on the wayside. I did enjoy Samantha's experiment very much though with that said. The story is starting to get to a very interesting point so I can forgive the slight growth neglect.

Just keep up the great work!

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