Queen Odessa finds a way to make the women of her realm enormously more pleasing, but the magic being bound to her service may not be quite so submissive as she believes.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 4.67
- Characters: 4.00
- Technical: 5.00
FleshFan
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 2, Technical= 5
Good one, joyful breast enlargement :)
deux_anges
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This is good! An interesting background premise with lots of opportunity for development in a variety of directions (breasts, butt, pregnancy, etc.). The writing was easy to read and no noticeable typos or grammatical errors.
Personally not too keen on the name of the green being, but I guess you are stuck with it.
anon
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
A wonderful start! Interested to see where you take it next. I can imagine the entire kingdom being drowned in our little Shuggy... and what about Maela?
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