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The Overflowing Bra

From an Antique Land
Queen Odessa finds a way to make the women of her realm enormously more pleasing, but the magic being bound to her service may not be quite so submissive as she believes. 
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Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 2, Technical= 5

Good one, joyful breast enlargement :)

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

This is good! An interesting background premise with lots of opportunity for development in a variety of directions (breasts, butt, pregnancy, etc.). The writing was easy to read and no noticeable typos or grammatical errors.

Personally not too keen on the name of the green being, but I guess you are stuck with it.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

A wonderful start! Interested to see where you take it next. I can imagine the entire kingdom being drowned in our little Shuggy... and what about Maela?

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