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The Overflowing Bra

Rols Garten
Paul's Problems 6: Secretarial Duties, Backroom Shenanigans, and Inappropriate Use of the Facilities
Light is shed on the shadowy organization that Olivia's mom runs. Also, Paul introduces himself to the dean's secretary and must deal with the ever daunting task of interacting with the mothers of the girls he is sleeping with. Everyone else is preparing for war.
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