After much delay (due to real life issues) I am happy to present to you Chapter IV of Saint, Sinner, Succubus. I will let the story speak for itself, but I am very happy with the feedback I have received from my proofreaders. I welcome any feedback you all have to present here, and I am actively monitoring The Overflowing Redit for questions and more in-depth critiques and feedback. I should also say that Iwill be returning to a three week delivery cycle. So without further adieu, Chapter IV.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.71
- BE: 3.29
- Characters: 3.57
- Technical: 3.57
kain123
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Is there any moderator to clean up the troll ratings?
AF
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I love this series so much...
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Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Stupid.... the story and the author
blick
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
You should be thrown in a pit and made fun of.
recluse
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Some dialog seems awkward, but most everything is sooooo goood: the descriptions, the characters, the story. It all makes for a erotic read that keeps you reading!
Z
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Excellent pacing, draws reader into the story and develops in an interesting fashion.
I Have None
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
WOW that was a very enjoyable read. Had an engaging story laced with a nice mixture of growth on both men and women.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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