When a would-be model is given a mysterious opportunity to finally make as much money as she wants, she jumps at the chance--even if it means a few extra pounds. After all, she can stop any time she wants, and doesn't she look better with rounder hips and bigger breasts? Exponential growth of assets both liquid and physical can only lead to one question: how much is too much?
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.14
- BE: 3.57
- Characters: 3.86
- Technical: 4.43
Alteka8
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Well written, well paced and interesting premise. Will you have other stories in the near future?
MasteTtoymaker
Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 1, Technical= 3
The beginning of the story doesn't seem to match up with the rest of it. I enjoyed the concept, but the character was kind of unlikeable and I pretty much had to chew my way through the story to get to the end, which might have done it for some, but the "immobile blob with loads of money" ending didn't feel satisfying at all, and again, I couldn't reconcile it with the opening interview.
Bonus points for a nonwhite protagonist, though.
TheFwank
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Awwww helllll yes, another Mich story! :D
I got hooked on your work when I found Fetish Fuel, and it's practically the only reason I check Overflowingbra anymore. The story was fun, sweet, and pretty sexy, though towards the end there you started to lose me on the "Immovable blob" proportions, even bigger and more helpless than "Growth Fantastic". ^^;
Still, fantastic story, already yearning for the next masterpiece from you. XD
Anonn
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Oh I always enjoyed your stories Mich. Do you think you'll create another story with Dee? I wanted to know about the astrophysicist one :)
AAA
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
party hardie
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Always enjoy your stories and look forward to new entries. While weight gain isn't necessarily my thing I do always appreciate your contributions to the site.
Anon
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Not a bad story overall, just not enough BE to be interesting to me.
Would love to see a purely BE version of this, or perhaps one with an unwilling girl! Or both :P
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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