This is a bit of an older one, but I forgot to put it up. A story of a woman trying to please her husband's desires...using very risky methods of experimental, self-produced lotion. In .txt and .html format. Fair criticism is always welcome.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.00
- BE: 2.00
- Characters: 2.00
- Technical: 3.00
Miss Lany
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 3
Well that story was fun, I suppose. It was a cute idea and had some sexy moments, but they all lasted just a few seconds and led to a rather abrupt ending. The story was rather short and didn't let its BE moments play out all that well, but it's good for a quick read and some more fun ideas for later.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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