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The Overflowing Bra

Rols Garten
Paul's Problems 5: What Happened to Olivia, Growth. and a Small Death
Olivia shares what she's been up to and what happened when she met the Dean. Then everyone else has a good time. Apologies for the delay in getting this one out.
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Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Ah, good, another episode. I check the site nearly every day looking for another installment. Good episode. Fun, enjoyable. Good action, good characters.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Another enjoyable installment. Please keep these coming. This series could stand on its own even without the fun stuff. But please keep the fun stuff in, it makes it much more enjoyable.I really want to know what happens next this is becoming an epic read.

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