xxxecil@hotmail.com
"Please Master, if I have pleased you...?" Her buttons opened, and her breasts seemed to plump up a few sizes like creamy honey-dew melons - with moist nipples. Kitten's tended to be especially intoxicating. However, his virility was truly superhuman, and he came to regret not ravishing his chief sperm scientist. But that was a problem easily remedied...
A prim and proper blonde with hair in a tight bun stumbled moaning out of a door onto the street - clutching, tearing at her silky blouse as her once slim belly surged into a taut dome of fertile ripening. All the while her clawing hands clutched at the throbbing swell within her traitorously fecund flesh. She squealed as her bra-straps strained into her shoulders, mountainous boobs already darkening the front of her blouse with the gush of milk needed to feed the brood sprouting within her laboring body.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 4.75
- Characters: 4.75
- Technical: 5.00
BB47
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
XXXecil, let me know if you ever want to collaborate on a story.
Bb47
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Fantastically erotic. This makes me want to be Xavier. Keep writing!!!
darkghost
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Yeah, I'm with ktc. Knowing the twist does nothing to ruin my enjoyment of the story!
ktc
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
The story focuses on freaky sex women and their attempts to seduce the protaganists and PE much more than it does BE. When I say freaky sex women I just mean nymphomaniacs whose contact with males enhances their genitals. While very hot for me to read and because I've read your prior work the twist didn't surprise me I enjoyed it quite a lot.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
Due to comment spam, any new posts with http in them will be destroyed.
