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"My sisters and I represent freedom. A man's freedom to feel his dick hardening; and seize any woman he pleases, to force his sperm into her. Freedommmm..." her voice lowering to a growl. "You want to sire your seed, into every woman you can grab!"
His hands tightened around her hips.
"Freeee your dick!"
"Wanna... be free..." he murmured as his pulse raced.
Out in the car, January switched on the radio:
".... Radio Free Earth; exposing the secrets of the Invasion!" rasped a quavering female voice. "Men think that these creatures are their loyal servants; but they are Loyal only to their most probable source of sperm!
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 4.67
- Characters: 4.67
- Technical: 4.67
BB47
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
one of my favorite authors! Awesome to see you writing again!!
blockhead
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Very nice. I can't wait to see what happens next. Resistance movement? What happened to the normal females? Do guys last forever? etc etc etc :-)
darkghost
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Good to see you writing again. I've always enjoyed your work.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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