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The Overflowing Bra

Shamus Baran
Ten Persons, Ten Doors -- Part Three
Part Three of Ten Persons Ten Doors. Inspired by the game NINE Persons, NINE Doors.  (So it's been years since I played it... bite me) Four more strangers show up, bringing the total to Eight.

The announcer seems hesitant to help them until all the players are in place, where could they be?

This is a bit of a slow burn, please give me some time to get some quality excuses for Boob growth.   I'm also open to suggestions for particular contestants.

Find me on Deviant Art if you want to ask me questions. (ShamusBaran)
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Miss Lany
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3

Your descriptions are improving and have a little more substance now. My only criticism is that the BE and sex scenes seem to just happen at random whenever you feel like it. Some direction would be nice, so hopefully later chapters keep up the improvements.

Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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