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Odd Request is a first person tale of tale spun by a prostitute named Mira.
It's a story of a very special client with peculiar tastes. Not only does she get the chance to make an obscene amount of money, but she gets a chance to fatten her lady bumps without implants.
Win. Win.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.00
- BE: 2.00
- Characters: 4.00
- Technical: 1.00
Anonymous
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 1
This could have been a good story, if it was finished and complete. Unfortunately, Part 3 appears to cut off in the middle of the chapter, and Part 6 is completely blank, no words at all. Part 5 was readable after I adjusted the line spacing to standard.
All in all, meh. If you're still around to receive feedback and are interested in fixing and finishing this story, I can tell you I would be interested, at least.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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