After transforming his lab partner Olivia into an angel only for her to run away, Paul visit's the sorority house that she lives in only to meet her room mate and bring out something long awaited in her. Samantha gets some help from the occult research society in tracking down Olivia. And Olivia herself helps broaden horizons.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.62
- BE: 4.31
- Characters: 4.62
- Technical: 4.85
I Think
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I'm going to just leave my comments on this chapter (will still rate the others), since there's not much point to seeing each comment five times, but... Wow. Not only extremely erotic but well-written? With characters that are funny, consistent, and interesting? Awesome work, do you have other works online, or even published work, erotic or not?
Molly123
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Easily the best series I have read on this site so far. Please continue!
Unfamed
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This is the best running story on the site in the past few years. I really hope you continue it!
Vahktang
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Thoroughly enjoying the series.
Hope you continue it.
ktc
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I agree that you could do a better job in describing the actual expansion. Other than that though, this is a real gem of BE. Very tongue in cheek premise that's enjoyable enough to read.
deus
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Good stuff. I agree with Samantha, more description of the BE, and of the sex in general, would be good. It took me awhile to get into this series, but now I can't wait for the next part. A few technical issues (typos/wrong word) seem to mar each chapter, but not enough to take a point off for.
Don't Stop Writing
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Love this story, really impressive writing, keep it up!
Chaos-Master
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
I am loving this story. PLEASE keep up the awesome work. Hitomi turning into an angel instead of an amazon like her sister was a nice twist.
Samantha
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Some people just don't know how to have fun. It'd be nice if there were a bit more expansion though, especially some of your key characters.
Ananymees
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 5
Wtf is this shit? I thought this was a site for growing boobs, not for fucking snake women. This place isn't even about growing boobs anymore, its just a pit of all the freakiest fetishes crammed together. Fuck, this site has gone down the drain.
For what its worth, its well written. I just hate that its not focused on BE anymore.
Iris
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Snake girls! Mmm, love it.
vertigo72480
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This this is rapidly becoming one of the best series I've had the pleasure to read.PLEASE MORE!
Moi Alibi
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Yay! It finally happened! A really for real snake girl!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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