Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.00
- BE: 5.00
- Characters: 4.00
- Technical: 4.00
Fahzbehn
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Aside from one small error in part three, well written. I'm not huge on fan fiction, but it did have the feel of Metroid type story. Good ending, too.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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