Paul must contend with a ten-thousand year old sorceress... who also happens to be the mother of one of the girls he is sleeping with. Meanwhile, Allison the amazon reconects with her fencing club and discovers how much they all have in common, Molly the nymph shares a love of knowledge with one of the school's librarians, and Olivia the totally normal human makes her feelings about Paul known. (Contains parts 1 and 2 in shiny .pdf format.)
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.83
- BE: 4.33
- Characters: 4.50
- Technical: 4.83
I Think
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Comment is in review on Part 4 ;)
Chaos-Master
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Keep up the awesome work. I hope Paul can bring Allison's sister as well as Oliva and her mother around
Kronk
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Yay for angel transformation. Not seen often around these parts. Loving it and the story so far.
Quick titbit of advice though, don't make the story too complicated because a lot of authors tend to give up when it gets going.
Or don't and power through. Even better
Moi Alibi
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Get a snake girl transformation already man! Ever since you suggested it it's been driving me insane!
Leon56
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Needs more Samantha action
Lily Bunny
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I will put all 5s so as not to upset the score of this story.
I would like to request chapter 3 in the old format. I am legally blind and PDFs don't work to well for me. If possible I would be very grateful if you could upload it in that format....because as of right now I can't read this story, and I am loving it so far.
Thank you.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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