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The Overflowing Bra

Rols Garten
Paul's Problems 2: The Changing Room and The King SIzed Bed
Paul's destiny is now revealed to him. He is the chosen one who will bring back an age of magic by uncovering the hidden magical creatures that live amoung humanity... with his penis. Also, in this educational installment the girls learn about customer satisfaction and one of Paul's professors learns about appropriate teacher/student interactions.
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Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Comment is in review on Part 4 ;)

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

A lot of fun! Reminds me a bit of the old XXXecil Faeophobia stories.

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

While some of the more complex scenes (be, sex) could use more description for clarity, I can't exactly say how. I really like the concept!

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