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Penny is on a late flight home after taking care of some touchy personal matters. But the weird girl next to her keeps saying the oddest things in her sleep...
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.70
- BE: 4.10
- Characters: 4.70
- Technical: 5.00
Rak
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Absolutely one of my favorite stories, certainly on TOB. Good heavens, I wish there was a sequel!
Mr Animo
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I thoroughly enjoyed this story, I've read it many times. It reads like an erotic episode of the Twilight Zone and has a wellrounded story Pun 100 Intended
fargus
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Boy this story has a VIBE! The eerie manner in which she speaks, the panic inducing growth, the detailed and phenomenal descriptions. One of my favorites on the site. Unique, captivating and hot. Great job!
Miss Lany
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
That was definitely an interesting read. Some of the character setup and development felt like it wasn't fleshed out enough to need inclusion, but their interactions were easily the best part. The expansion definitely got better over the course of the story and the premise was a good hook from the start that was fun to explore. Keep up the good work.
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
anon
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Keep up the good work, between this and "a burden on your chest" you've written two of my favourite stories. I felt the BE could of been improved by having her grow out of her bra more slowly or a good description towards the end of the size.
dranon
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Wow, I really enjoyed everything about this. Just a terrific experience all the way around. Excellent work! I do wish Penny had kept a bit more of Ova's gift, but what're ya gonna do?
KaylaDecay
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
As always, your writing is really solid with more creative and erotic situations (definitely dug the tension and thrill of it being so public), though your BE descriptions did feel a little awkward in the beginning. When you call the breasts softballs yet their spacial descriptions imply a bit more than that. However, once the story ramps up and the descriptions drop object-comparisons all together stick with the spacial, this was one of the better stories on this site in awhile. And I agree with Mew, it would be wonderful to see these characters in another story. All in all, thank you!
G-man001
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I rather enjoyed the novel expansion idea. The characters were very well sketched out. I really great effort from one of my new favorite authors.
Meweleventeen
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
I read this on dA too, it was nice. The BE is a bit uncomfortable and socially awkward for me so I didnt like that however the CHARACTERS should make a comeback in some other future story, I really like them for who they are and I hope to see more of them.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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