Late Christmas story due to a bit of a bit of a delay on my part. A story of...well, why elves don't decorate Christmas trees. Right there in the title I guess. I'll give you a hint as to why: it involves growing boobs. Included in the .zip file are: .txt and .odt files of the story, as well as a sketch that inspired the story, made by CRUBAT. You can find more of his stuff on deviantArt.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.00
- BE: 4.17
- Characters: 3.83
- Technical: 3.50
tsokei
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Great work, felt average in some areas but the whole package and high BE description quality (and pacing) upped the enjoyment for me. I loved this (SPOILER-ISH):
"more and more of the tree by the second, causing more needles to come in contact with her bosom, and thus causing the growth to accelerate."
squigy
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Your strong suit are your characters and the way they think. Very good story with a wonderful premise. You could have gone much more into the sexual side, but you chose not to. The ending leaves one wondering what she is thinking, but there are a million ways to think at least.
Lightman
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Cute story with a very fun (and funny) premise. You did a good job making the characters likable and the BE scene(s) equally well described. I noticed a few spelling errors here and there, but nothing that detracted too much from my overall enjoyment. Definitely one of the better stories here.
As an aside, the comment section really needs to be moderated here. I've noticed a trend of outright dickery lately.
Stephen
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Quality reviews, guy. Go be a cunt somewhere else.
el burro
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
it counts your score anyway you melon.
guy
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
I didn't read the story, so don't count my score. I only downloaded it for the pic, which was really good, kudos to Crubat.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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