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The Overflowing Bra

Samus' Final Smash Mishap
Just a silly 5 page Breast Expansion story using Zero Suit Samus in a Smash Bros. setting. In .txt and .odt format, let me know if the files are messed up and I'll upload in a different format.
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Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

This was really good short story, a fun BTS look at Smash Bros., and even though I deduced the ending early on, it was still very enjoyable.
Technically, this was very sound. Nearly flawless grammar, and good descriptions without getting into minute details. Will definitely need to check out your other work on the site.

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