Kim arrives home with news of Jake and his twisted influence over her, only to find that her friend Maya is less receptive to the news than she had hoped.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 5.00
- Characters: 5.00
- Technical: 5.00
xtra123
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Weird is right. Weird is good. Keep it up!
Catfish
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Another excellent chapter with an excellent (albeit weird) transformation. Again, all I can say is that I'm looking forward to the next installment!
ktc
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Anomaly is a very appropriate title. This chapter gets pretty weird guys, but the writing is enjoyable. Technically, I don't recall any true BE besides Maya growing multiples, and I'm not sure that counts as BE but it's all subjective. Keep writing, can't wait for the next installment. Maybe we'll get that BDSM scene after all with the party chick haha.
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