Kim wakes up with a ripping hangover, unsure of what happened the night before.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 5.00
- Characters: 5.00
- Technical: 5.00
The Light Fantastic
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Absolutely fantastic! I'm glad to see the tables turn a little, too. Eager for more!
Bahamad
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I've got to say, this is turning into a high point for recent memory of submissions. The grammar is good, the internal justification helps to show the counter-arguments were thought about, and the escalating changes and descriptions are exciting as all heck.
A sexually excited young woman with a reality-bending array of dials and virtual power? I can only picture her starting to work it like a turntable! I'm eager to see this continue as far as inspiration carries it, and hope it does so for a while.
Catfish
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Wow, another great installment. I thought the "split personality" aspect was especially well done. Now can't wait for the next chapter to see what kind of trouble a horny nine-breasted woman can get into with a transformation device, assuming she can find a charger.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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