(SPOILERS BELOW! If you want to get a general consensus before reading then you're in for good news... you don;t need to! This story is fan-bloody-tastic! You're missing out by not reading.)
I can't give this anything less than a 5/5 for everything. You are an absolute phenomenal writer, Treble. I have never read such a realistic approach on the mini-giantess fetish before. Even when I try to roleplay it, I always make the mini-giantess out into a very loving and caring figure much like Vivian was at the end but I've only occasionally explored that sort of ferocious and fearful dominance however I was playing the amazon. I almost felt like my like for the fetish was being interrogated and that I had to be absolutely sure that I was really in love with it.
I'll start from the bottom, your technical quality was just out of this world. The onomatopoeia's and the reactions of Reed just made everything seem so real. I was feeling scared because of what Viv might do to him (I was so relieved when everything ended with the laughter) and the crunching walls brought everything into perspective. I always imagine very elegant mini-giantess' who can weave about the world like it's nothing despite the adjusted size... but Vivian wasn't that, she was rough and brutal. The world was in her way and so it had to move. I felt clammy, shivers went down my spine. I had never felt that way about a piece of EROTIC FICTION before. 5/5 without a doubt.
Characters were both good. Reed was especially fantastic as he wasn't the typical horny MC that doesn't care when his fantasies of dominant amazons become real. He was real, I could imagine myself being in his shoes. I was there with him and his reactions were my own. Vivian was also a very entertaining character to read about but shew as a little more typical, in my mind. The semi-vengeful wife who wants to punish her husband with raw femininity. Still, she was an interesting character to read about as she isn't quite as black and white as that first judgment. Sylvia as a character was... a little boring, in my mind. The stereotypical, unemotional, unflinching wish-granter. However as a plot device she was great and enabled the story to move on and for Vivian's dreams to become her twisted reality. 5/5 again purely for Reed.
BE Description. That's what we all come here for and you did not disappoint, Treble. No sire. The description as her ass cheeks tore that skirt slowly, how she puffed out her chest and sent a cascade of buttons everywhere. How I mentioned earlier that as she grew taller and stronger... the house became disposable to her so long as she caught her prey. How her growing strength and height was new to her and that things had to be sacrificed as she adjusted to it. Phenomenal.
My only dislike for the story is that the shrinking at the end was a slight turn-off but that's just my personal opinion and those two or three last pages will not ruin such a brilliant story. However it also allowed the story to show how although Reed's fantasies seem to be coming real, it's Vivian's desires that are really coming to fruition. From the dominant growth, to the modelling and the photoshoots and then finally to the shrinking where she has finally gained, essentially, full control over her shy, reserved husband's life. Wow.
Final words: Breathing. NEVER STOP WRITING, YOU WONDERFUL HUMAN BEING.
