The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

MysteryGuy9215
Losing Control
Average Scores:
 Ivan
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 3, Technical= 5 
Oh yeah, fabouuls stuff there you!
 Vitruvius
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
Thank you for a very polished read, and at least (possible spoiler) addressing the morality of nc.
 Anon
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
Loved your story man, excellent characters, interesting plot. Would love to see a sequel.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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