The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Losing Control
Average Scores:

Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 3, Technical= 5

Oh yeah, fabouuls stuff there you!

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Thank you for a very polished read, and at least (possible spoiler) addressing the morality of nc.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Loved your story man, excellent characters, interesting plot. Would love to see a sequel.

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