Inflated to the point where all her fantasies are finally made flesh, and knowing she really ought to stop before she pushes herself too far, Colette discovers that instead wanting to stop as she nears her limits, she finds herself begging for more, even with her breasts stretched dangerously full already.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 5.00
- Characters: 4.75
- Technical: 5.00
cman
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
So fun and exciting. Her submissiveness and eagerness is terrific :)
Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Different strokes... I personally love the belly inflation idea and hope that if you continue the story (great cliffhanger at the end!) that you will incorporate her belly getting absolutely enormous! By far, I do love the half pump magic and the Colette's though that the pump itself becomes swollen and bulging, which basically hits the nail on the head for me for similarities to the cartoon firehose bit where a kink in the line causes a gigantic bubble to form behind the blockage... and when that kink is removed... only fun can happen after that! I hope that you will also consider evolving into Colette's suggestion of using helium somehow! Thanks again for your amazing writing and imagination! Definitely a 5 star story!
MysteryGuy9215
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
This is phenominal! One of the best I have read in a long while. While belly expansion is still not my thing, the way it was used here (which I won't say to prevent spoilers) was enough to make me turn a blind eye to it and even enjoy that! Such a brilliant story and a great continuation from the first part.
If I had to critique something, I would have to say that Colette's speeches towards the middle of the story were getting just a tad long winded, even if they were focused on expansion related things. But that's a minor nitpick.
My favorite part, yet again, were the "half pumps" as from before, but you cranked them into over drive here! Loved it! I love the cliffhanger as well, and look forward to part 3!
TheBandColdplay
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Seeing a new story by Kodos is like Christmas morning, and this time was no different. An excellent continuation of an excellent story.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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