Pretty good one! Not gonna lie, I've liked your other works a bit better, but this one wasn't bad at all. I liked Collette's character a lot! A very fun, charismatic lover with a lust for inflation-what's not to like?
My favorite part was the "half pump" situation, where she gains all that at once. That was freaking brilliant! I wish you had focused on that for a little longer, maybe have them analyze it a bit further, maybe a bit more confusion, fear or panic from either Collette or the main character? But as it was, I loved that, both times it happened.
What I DIDN'T like was the belly inflation. Yes, I know, to each their own, but it seemed to come out of nowhere and its always personally distracting for me - but again, that's my own personal taste! But that is the reason why overall enjoyment is only at 3: once you bring bellies into the equation, I tend to start scrolling over to see how focused it is on that aspect. While it doesn't linger TOO much on that, towards the end, it gets very noticeable.
But all that aside, I liked the characters, though I wish you had done more with the roommate. I also was hoping there would be a bit of panic or losing control in this story, but as it is, its still very well written and includes plenty of BE. Can't wait to see what you have in store next! :)
