A simple little one shot involving a hot babe and some hot coffee. This is a nice break from the incredibly plot heavy and character driven story that I recently wrote, so if there are mistakes in there in places, I apologize. This was just a quick thing written at around midnight in about an an hour and a half to two hours. In .txt and .html format.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 5.00
- Characters: 5.00
- Technical: 4.50
SapphireBlueHearts
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Another great little quick-to-read story. I appreciate the inclusion of lactation in the story, and I've always loved the 'karmic' angle of a lot of expansion stories. Good work.
CleavageCuddler
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I really enjoyed this short story. Short and sweet. Plenty of BE, enjoyable characters, and even a sense of plot near the end. Please, keep up the good work.
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