The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Coffee With Extra Milk
A simple little one shot involving a hot babe and some hot coffee. This is a nice break from the incredibly plot heavy and character driven story that I recently wrote, so if there are mistakes in there in places, I apologize. This was just a quick thing written at around midnight in about an an hour and a half to two hours. In .txt and .html format.
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Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Another great little quick-to-read story. I appreciate the inclusion of lactation in the story, and I've always loved the 'karmic' angle of a lot of expansion stories. Good work.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I really enjoyed this short story. Short and sweet. Plenty of BE, enjoyable characters, and even a sense of plot near the end. Please, keep up the good work.

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