The Overflowing Bra

Liked the boy's dilemma.

I liked it very much and it flowed from one thing to another very well. You get the big 5. Even the explanation came out well. Thanks.

I really liked the story! I understand male BE may not be for everyone, but it's very clear in the description as to what this story contains. I skip a few stories on this site based of the content of their description, yet I'd never want to tell anyone that they shouldn't post here just because that subsection of the BE fetish isn't what I like.

I love the characters in this, which is always what I look for first in a story. Everyone was so normal; so human! Not once did I get the feeling that a character's reactions had been synthesized for the sake of the story, which is extremely unusual! Apart from that, I loved how Avery and Mary got together, and I giggled my head off when Avery freaked out over having B-cup breasts. He's lucky he doesn't live in northern Europe, it's almost normal for a slim young man to have noticeable bumps.

I'm surprised that people think stories on this site have *recently* gone too far afield from strict BE. As far as I know, weirder transformations have appeared in BE stories for a while, including gender-bending transformations like male breasts. Take a look in the site's back catalog and see what I mean. I'm guessing that people are troubled by this particular story because it features only male BE, no female BE. While male BE isn't *my* thing either, I don't see how mysteryguy has broken any rules. While I may yet be corrected, I've been up and down this site, and I can't find any stated requirement that only female breasts expand. Unless I'm wrong, people who want to write about male BE have as much a right to post stories here as the rest of us. The only requirements I find anywhere state that a. there must be BE and b. no pedophilia. This story passes on both counts. I'm also not worried about 'impure' expansion stories taking over the site. Last I noticed, there's plenty of old-fashioned female-oriented BE to go around, even as recently as this month. And finally, mysteryguy has posted TONS of female-only BE stories. If anyone was guilty of changing the fetish content on TOB, it wouldn't be him.
A quick review of my own: as I said before, male BE isn't my thing but I think this is still really good, just as a story. It has likable characters, lots of descriptive detail and, while not short, it ends before it gets old. Some of the expansion scenes, particularly the last one, felt a little perfunctory. But that's a minor complaint. Overall, it's very well written.

Have to agree with the below comment.  I'm sure there may be a place for male BE out there on the internet, but that place is not here. The fetishes being featured in stories on this site lately are getting quite wide of the original concept of this site, which was female breasts growing larger. How far do we let these fetishes go?  What's next?  Necrophilia, or worse?

A story about a man growing breasts is completely inappropriate for this website.  And before anyone criticizes that maxim: consider how the Unending BE story has given way to countless fetishes that barely relate to BE. That may be fine for people who love the idea of male tits, but I'm sure it's not fine for the rest of us.

This is an excellent story.  I found it a lot of fun to read through.  You don't see too many male BE stories, but really the most intriguing aspect of this tale is the grounded and realistic interactions between the characters.  Even if this story didn't have BE in it, I think I would still find it enjoyable to read, since you've made all of the main characters likable in some way.

I enjoyed that. Good job.

Don't pay any mind to that Tolin fellow. This story was unique and very well written. Male BE isn't my forte either, but I could respect the characters and the story you were presenting here. Well done!

I'm sorry... It's just that I guy going through BE isn't a turn on at all for me.