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The Overflowing Bra

MysteryGuy9215
Accidental Growth With the Flip of A Coin
A woman works at a salon, and gets an odd coin as a gift from a parting friend. This coin ends up causing a lot of trouble, and not just for her!
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Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4 
Please hurry and write a sequal. I need to know what happens lol
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