The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

MysteryGuy9215
Growing Embarassment
A very short story written in about an hour, used as a way of flexing out the ideas for my next story. Simple, to the point, and, hopefully, still very fun.
Average Scores:
 BB47
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
Good job!
 Chris Yohn
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
Great story for being written in such a short time. Flirty, sinister, and has abundant growth!
 yuuup
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4 
Pretty good mate! excellent for a short story.
 anon
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
;)
 ktc
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
Fantastic. Good pacing, good story, and overall enjoyable if short read. Can't wait for more.
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