Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.71
- BE: 3.86
- Characters: 3.43
- Technical: 3.86
Bb47
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Hot. Extremely womanizing as fuck, but hot.
deus
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Excellent. I only noticed one technical issue, an instance of your vs. you're, but I didn't take anything off for it. Thanks for writing, and for sharing.
Bob
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Excellent. Could have had a slower transition, and it would have been nice to see the final result
A
Overall= 1, BE= 4, Characters= 1, Technical= 3
Steve
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 3
I'm big fan of the descriptive small jumps in size her breasts take as they expand throughout the story.
John
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
My only regret is that it wasn't longer.
zymurgy
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
All 1s because I forgot the synopsis. Anyway, here it is: After a night of over-indulgence, a woman swears she will never use Substance B again, a drug that greatly enhances pleasure but also transforms long-time users into sex-addicted bimbos.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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