The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Substance B
Average Scores:

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Hot.  Extremely womanizing as fuck, but hot.
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Excellent. I only noticed one technical issue, an instance of your vs. you're, but I didn't take anything off for it. Thanks for writing, and for sharing.

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Excellent. Could have had a slower transition, and it would have been nice to see the final result

Overall= 1, BE= 4, Characters= 1, Technical= 3

What a gross story

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 3

I'm big fan of the descriptive small jumps in size her breasts take as they expand throughout the story.

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

My only regret is that it wasn't longer.

Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

All 1s because I forgot the synopsis. Anyway, here it is: After a night of over-indulgence, a woman swears she will never use Substance B again, a drug that greatly enhances pleasure but also transforms long-time users into sex-addicted bimbos.

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