happyguyprime@yahoo.com
A funny short story done in the Find-Your-Own-Way method, but with fun BE results! Play along and enjoy!
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.67
- BE: 3.67
- Characters: 3.67
- Technical: 3.67
joesmoe
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Funny story! who gives a crap about following the sections!
hg
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This is an ingenious and comical story. The author is brilliant. I wonder if anyone was actually dopey enough to try to follow the section links instead of just reading the story through as is clearly intended. This is a wonderful story and stands out in the history of short BE fiction.
FallenSoul
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
the story is crap, considering that what you are suposed to start off of, sections 161c, 110b, and 132a are not in the story line so all you get to read of the story is when his/her boss chews his/her ass out, then ur lost, i spent an hour looking for those sections, and did not find them! i am peeved
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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