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Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.60
- BE: 4.00
- Characters: 4.20
- Technical: 4.20
Sucker4Boobs
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
This was a good short story. Loved the Legend of Zelda references, but the BE and characters could have used a bit of fleshing out, no pun intended.
kabut
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
I thought this was a great story. Lactation isn't quite my thing, but this was a very easy and enjoyable read.
maybeenuf4u
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great story, with a happy ending. Very entertaining. Leaves a lot of room for additional stories. The tribe of Serena, the mother of Malon. Well written too. I only saw 1 typo. Uneasonably, I think. One tiny criticism that I'm sure you've heard before, loose the text file. Then old geezers like me can increase the font size!
Xero
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
I've seen comics about this situation. Not per say, but as a fan of the series, you have my approval.
Cuddlebeam
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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