The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Bust Max
Angela becomes displeased with her figure, and finds supplements that may shape her to her desires. Invloves weight loss and breast expansion.

And if I may say something real quick: I don't mind any criticism. Not in the least. And I suppose I should have said this in prior story uploads, but I neglected to, so I'm saying it now: Many of the stories I am uploading were written YEARS ago, before I had any sort of reference to BE writing. All I had were vague ideas in my head to lead me.

Is it an excuse for poor quality? Certainly not. I could always go back and re-edit some of them (and for most of them, I do before I upload, but not to a high degree). But I just wanted to say that. Again, this should not deter anyone from giving criticism or feedback, I just wanted to clarify and give some perspective is all. I appreciate any words or ratings of any kind, as long as they are constructive. Know that I am always working to improve my writings. Thank you.
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swell guy
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Great story with even more potential. You're writing is awesome. Just keep refining it like a sharp blade. You rock.

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Another good one, but yeah, more detail, longer stuff. Enjoyed it!

Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

I rarely comment, but I think this story needs a lot of detail improvements as well as continuation. I'd much rather know how it's growing as well. It seems to degrade as it goes down the way. A nice story though with some potential.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

i rather see your sories in just txt format
otherwise great storie

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